Have you ever had a conversation
without any words?
Have you ever gone flying
and left your body behind?
Have you ever been so enthralled
that time lost its meaning?
Have you ever locked your heart and soul
and forgotten to shut the door?
Have you ever been afraid of losing
something you may not even have?













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*those who never leave my side*
cassiejo123, fallingintograce, onewingedangel, trashcanpunk (although he has left DA), and disturbedathena. If you feel you deserve a place on this list, prove it to me.
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OMFG!
That has so much power for me right now.
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"If you said that you could kill the things inside me, you're just a liar... everything inside me is already dead..."
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"at 4 in the morning you know where i'll be... im running red lights asleep at the wheel"
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~Mexicano de alma aunque mi mente piense en inglés.
and forgotten to shut the door?"
heh, well.. this one time. anyway, i like the first stanza alot, it feels like an intro almost and leads in well. second part is cool, but i dislike rhymeing so kinda lost some points there. all around not bad.
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do NOT thank me for this comment. insted, please spend any time you would have spent thanking me browsing my gallery. thank you.
As for the poem I agree with most that the second verse needs some work, what is up to you just do as you do & like it cause that's where all good works begin
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I'm jus' here & now
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